Blast you, Havershaw! How dare you patronize me. I am not losing my nerve!
Well that's just weird. (No bearing on what actually happened in the video).
I always get excited when there's actually a comment, and then I'm inevitably disappointed when they have little to no bearing on the video I slaved over. This time, I prepared myself before clicking, reminding myself that comments rarely say much about the videos or whether people like them. But I still didn't expect a comment that explicitly states how it's not about the video.
I heard that girl is a porn-star, so she's not worth the vlogstar's trouble... He could just rent the porno. :-)
Alternate ending: Girl mutters "jerk" and flips the wallet into the trash can right behind her. Zoom to Klugman's exposed ID card in trash during ending music. Future storylines possible re/ identity theft, etc. Background is overexposed in opening scene, a bit distracting. Dialogue is well-written and well-delivered. Sound is good. Quick cuts are good. Klugman is authentically obnoxious. Maybe other quirky traits will emerge. Good! A keeper for your reel.Yours truly, W. Schmidt
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